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I got a mentor!An old friend got back from Beijing and agreed on training me like it pupil!!!!:dummy:I thought it would be easy but actually is totally the opposite!Aki doesnt allow me to work more than 3 hours*this means i must finish a picture in 3 hours!!!!:faint:What a pain!!!!>.<
======:star:This is my first attempt:star:==========
I started with a portrait(my mentor doesn't interfere with what I draw and how I must draw it,he simply watches my time,and shows me techniques!^^;)I thought for a cyborg*working on a tutorial on cyborg/doll skin:D.Nothing special!his advice was:''simply concentrate on the main part of the pic,the one that attracts more the viewer!Dont lose time in other unnecessary details''!*so I focused only on her face^.^ it sucks but i guess I improved my times!:D
~SAI
~PHts
`2 hours 21!
Enjoy!
(I miss you guys)
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It's a pity that this picture is so small, but I guess, for only two hours, you did a very good job on it. My favorite part of this work is how her hair blend with the fiery light behind her, and her eyes...it conveys sadness, distrust, full of unanswerable questions. I like it. The cracks on her face looks good, though I can't say the same for the ones on her shoulder and fingers. On the shoulders, the cracks made the skin look more like a marble stone, a pattern instead of cracks. And the fingers simply can use more time, more refining. But then again, this is better than what most people can do in two hours. You might think that you're lucky to have such a mentor, but trust me, I think your mentor is also lucky to have a student like you.

Very lovely :)